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Friday 9 September 2016

7 comments:

  1. Hi Sahara, I really enjoyed reading this. Great to see this up on your blog. I know that you are capable of doing some fantastic writing all by yourself and I can't wait to read the next story.

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  2. Hi Sahara, I thought you deleted my name in the front.

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  3. Kia Ora Sahara My name is Jazmine And I am from Greymain School and in Mamaku Hub.
    WOW this slide has a lot of detail in it great work and this book is really good.
    By Jazmine.

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  4. Hi Sahara i like your story about the magical book because it is piches the words about the magical story.
    Sahara did you Recognised there is one Extra slid.

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  5. hi Sahara I like your writing but you need to not repeat your words.

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  6. Hi Sahara,Hauroa here and I like the way you put a lot of detail in your work but you could of put a bit more photos in the stories so people know what they look like a what they are doing.
    KEEP IT UP!!

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