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Friday, 2 September 2016

Story starter
The family were beginning to regret going into the Giant’s garden…...
Vocab list:
Dandelion          floated              sunflowers
Giant                   grabbed            blinded
Garden               stalk                   seed
Mother              held                    pod

Narrative Plan
Title The3 fureys

Introduction


Who mum ,and the girls
What went on the other side
Where:Forest
When:2016
Introduce the problem



The kids went over the other side to check it out they seen a big garden it was bigger then the house.


How did the problem get worse?

The fureys went in the garden they seen a giant
Running to them they had nowhere to go they looked every where.




Resolution (How did you solve the problem?)


Mum was looking for the kids she was angry because she told them to stay away from the other side of the village.



What was the lesson learnt?
The lesson was never go somewhere without permission






IN 2016 there lived a village there was a little family living in a little house there was a mum she had three kids and their name was Zaralee, Zary and Karalee .

After school Zaralee,Zary and Karlee always likes to go to the forest and play there mum told them to stay away from the other side of the village because the biggest giant in history might come, the three girls did not believe there mum so they made a plan.

The next day the girls went home and went to the forest they went on the other side of the village they seen the biggest garden ever it was bigger then their house they seen magic coming out of the flowers they went on one, but before they went they heard big stomps and the whole village heard it  too,  the girls was going to go but the magic flower flew them up in the air  bella, emma and emily were safe but they seen some other plants.

Everyone was worried what was gonna happen, mum was so angry but she had a plan to get her kids back she went to an sunflower and told the giant to come and the giant pushed her up the sky she seen her kids too, Bella, Emma and Emily flyed as fast as they could,the magic flower took them down and everybody was happy again.
Mum was angry but she is lucky that she got her kids back was most important thing to her.

The kids knew never go somewhere your mum says stay away.

3 comments:

  1. hi sahara I really liked your story it was fantastic but maybe next time you can put more things on your blog?

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